You had alot of data, and your hypothesis is perfect, but the data table was confusing, and your spelling is bad. The analysis is good, and the conclusion was great.
1. The graph gave the correct data and your agencies was great too! 2. I don't think I would change the way you guys did the project it seems fine except I might redo the cabinets and the background. Also the procedure was fine. 3. I could see the controls being easily controlled except the time between the spray and the person rating it. In the background there could have been more research about the different colognes. The graph and data table was easy to read and was great. 4. The analysis and conclusion could have been clearly stated and way more information but they were pretty good.
hay man i just wanted to stop and make a helpful comment on your project:1) I think you had a very good hypothesis, it explained your project and followed all the rules. 2) data table was confusing and you should have included some average numbers or percents on the bottom. 3) good Analysis, it explained the graph and was easy and clear to read and understand. 3) your Sources and references did not follow APA and were very bad. Look at the APA booklet an go over them.
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ReplyDeleteYou had alot of data, and your hypothesis is perfect, but the data table was confusing, and your spelling is bad. The analysis is good, and the conclusion was great.
ReplyDelete1. The Procedure and Conclusion were good.
ReplyDelete2. I wouldn't change how you did the project.
3. Your data was easy to read.
4. It was fine.
1. The graph gave the correct data and your agencies was great too!
ReplyDelete2. I don't think I would change the way you guys did the project it seems fine except I might redo the cabinets and the background. Also the procedure was fine.
3. I could see the controls being easily controlled except the time between the spray and the person rating it. In the background there could have been more research about the different colognes. The graph and data table was easy to read and was great.
4. The analysis and conclusion could have been clearly stated and way more information but they were pretty good.
hay man i just wanted to stop and make a helpful comment on your project:1) I think you had a very good hypothesis, it explained your project and followed all the rules. 2) data table was confusing and you should have included some average numbers or percents on the bottom. 3) good Analysis, it explained the graph and was easy and clear to read and understand. 3) your Sources and references did not follow APA and were very bad. Look at the APA booklet an go over them.
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